As soon as you enter the blog, it captivates you through the
use of animations and moving transitions. It is flooded with colour and professional
pictures, which gives a welcoming feel to the page. The posts present a variety
of lifestyle, fashion and beauty tips that capture a wider audience by offering
something for everyone. Navigation through the site is simple and easy as there
is categories drop-down menus for each topic, which makes it accessible for the
audience. The content of the blog is very modern and up-to-date which makes to relevant, meaning that it would receive more views. There are links to all other
social media sites at the top of the page, which means that the audience can
follow on all forms of social media.
However, the amount of text on the posts are sometimes
overwhelming which is discouraging to read, this could disinterest some reader.
The pictures have been placed at the bottom, instead of being used to break up
the text, which could have made it more appealing. Additionally, the homepage
of the blog shows all of the recent posts, however due to the variety of post
it could be perceived as cluttered as there is so much to take in.
Overall, we think that this blog is impressive as it has a professional
finish, and a girly touch! This really appeals to the female audience, which is
her main demographic. Your guaranteed to find something you like due to the
vast amount of topics and tips.
Name: Alicia Roddy
Instagram: LISSYRODDYY
From the outset of seeing the blog, you are
immediately met with a clean and simple page with a classy undertone. As
part of the Lissy Roddy blog audience, we can appreciate the simplicity of it
all, we are captured by her quintessential fashion sense, her edgy vibes and
the pure modernity of her outfits. Roddy’s Instagram and blog page both follow
a consistent theme, which allows her to maintain and satisfy her
viewers/followers. Shamefully we are all waiting for her next posts on the
latest outfits- so we can copy her vibes.
The only downfall in her aesthetically pleasing blog is, to put it
simply, she cannot write.
There are three flaws in her writing-
- The lack of formulation in her sentences
- Conversational tone of writing verging on being too casual and thoughtless for the reader
- Unnecessary punctuation
Overall, her blog is rather impressive and
we love the layout of her blog, and her constant uploading of photos. As an
Agency, we plan to take inspiration from the sheer simplicity of her blog and hope
to make it as appeasing on the eyes just as Roddy has done.
